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Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith

1840 • Wordsmith

Hi Aaron,

Welcome to the site! Thanks for that great critique of chapter 2. You're right, the 'corrupt bishop' thing is pretty overdone, I suppose. Honestly I could probably just delete all of chapter two and seed little bits of it into chapter three and be better off.

Ben Jacobson

1859 • Wordsmith

Hello Aaron,

Welcome to Scrib. Gnomes huh? That makes me really interested in seeing your writing.

-Ben

Name:	Aaron Christopher
Sex:	Male
Location:	Michigan
Birthday:	Feb. 20, 2008
Words Written:	4487
Hottest Words:	great, gilgatron, dip, onion, space, galleon

About Me

Occupation:	Photographer and writer
About Me:	Graduated with a BA in Creative Writing, looking forward to possibly attempting an MFA soon
Interests:	Photography, reading. laughing, plotting an overthrow of the Shadow Underpants Gnome government.
Loves:	Love.
Hates:	Love.

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Oct. 25, 2008

Aaron Christopher became a fan of Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith.

Aaron Christopher published Gilgatron's Space Galleon.

Oct. 24, 2008

Aaron Christopher deleted Gilgatron's Space Galleon.

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Aaron Christopher published Gilgatron's Space Galleon.

Aaron Christopher wrote a critique for The Virgin Polyp, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith.

Aaron Christopher wrote a critique for Dealing with the Dead, Chapter 2: The Awoken, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith.

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Gilgatron's Space Galleon

science fiction, humor, biblical, myth

A sweeping, epic, and dramatic retelling of Noah's Ark. Set in the future. And God is an onion dip. » Read...

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On The Virgin Polyp, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: I was seriously enjoying this story up until the dream sequence. I blame this on my Advanced Fiction professor...but I hate d... » Read more...

On Dealing with the Dead, Chapter 2: The Awoken, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: I must also agree with a few others here...a flashback is a bad idea. Flashbacks and dream sequences rarely end well. I... » Read more...