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On Perpetual Loops Perpetually Annoy, by Ezra Fortune: Very interesting format. As a developer, I like it... it's
certainly not something you see every day. But I h... » Read more...
On Ashes in Winter, Chapter 2, by The Haunter in the Dork: Hey Haunter, just an FYI, chapter titles are optional-- if you
don't enter one, the title will be: Ashes in Winter, Chapt... » Read more...
On In All My Dead Living, by Angel w o Wings: Good stuff. I think this is a strong work... it has a lot
of interesting images, is deliberately vague while being myst... » Read more...
On Hitler and His Hand Grenades, by Allie Hueperts: Hi Allie, and welcome! This isn't going to be a critique,
just a bit of clarification: think of a post as a single ... » Read more...
On Broken Wing, by FireFly747: Hey FireFly747, I meant to write a critique earlier, but I just
got a free moment to do it. I noticed that you changed ... » Read more...