I hope it wasn't too long-winded. Nice web page, by the way. I didn't know English isn't your first language. (or so I understand) Most impressive. What is your first, if you would care to indulge my curiosity.

Hi, thanks for the input. Now that you mention it, I do remember the Fallout intro, and though I would like to, I obviously utterly failed to capture that spirit.
I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, and hope I can fix it.

Hi Alex,

Thanks so much for the critique. I'll work on the world-building stuff.

-Natalie

hey, alex--
thanks for all the good ideas to explore with my story! i appreciate you taking the time to read & send me your thoughts. very cool.

Congrats on your contest win

hi, alex--
thanks for your critique of my chapter! i admit, i wrote this a few years ago in a fit of "i'm agonna write me somethin'!", and haven't spent much time rewriting--i will, though! and i'll hang onto your suggestions for when i do. much appreciated!
(i'm glad you entered the contest this month, too--good luck!)

I am not convinced that you write. Where be your works?