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I just wanted to say that I've read 12 chapters of Foursome tonight. It isn't taking critiques so I wanted to let you know I like it. It needs polish, but the story is good, and well told. You have a natural voice. Very enjoyable to read. 
I will be back to read more tomorrow!
I will be back to read more tomorrow!
You're very welcome! It was a lovely read. I was really impressed.
That sound! On the wind. The FFF is calling. Will you answer?
I have been pilfering XD I've been enjoying your fash fictions a lot. I've never seen that genre before and I'm tempted to try a couple of my own XD
You're welcome
I don't know, perhaps it did. I think it's more likely that after 2 decades of use, my brain has decided to give up on me. Lazy thing. Anyways, hope the next chapter comes out soon!
Hans posted a link to the original as a comment on my version. I learned it as "Little Thousand Furs". It's also Grimm so there's a lot of similar themes, but I was actually thinking that it reminded me more of Cinderella!
Thanks for the crit! It's not Snow White. I will have to look in to your reading suggestions though
Yup... it's already falling. They're predicting up to another foot by tomorrow night, on top of the 2.5 ft we've already got. Apparently, I've moved to Canada and no one told me...
Allison, thanks for reading and commenting on Snowed In! It's one of those pieces that I think worked better in theory/in my head than in practice.
I haven't been outside since Friday...that may have something to do with how many times I edited the piece!
I haven't been outside since Friday...that may have something to do with how many times I edited the piece!
I loved it! I'm going to pilfer your works for more to read XD
| Name: | Allison Martine |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | The OC |
| Birthday: | Feb 2, 1978 |
| Words Written: | 57,704 |
| Hottest Words: | kieran, grady, akimi, aidan, knew, head |
About Allison
| Occupation: | That's classified. And actually not very interesting. |
| Interests: | reading, writing, and mild pyromania. |
| Publications: | haven't written anything to be published, only filed, and that's not exciting at all. |
| Favorite Books: | Discworld (all of it actually)-- Terry Pratchett; Songs of Earth and Power-Greg Bear; The Hyperion Cantos-Dan Simmons; The Dark Tower series--Stephen King; American Gods--Neil Gaiman; That Hideous Strength--C.S. Lewis; Sick Puppy--Carl Hiaasen; KoKo--Peter Straub; and the list goes on. |
| Favorite Movies: | The Darjeeling Limited; Princess Bride; Dodgeball; Death to Smootchy; Quills; Boondock Saints; Signs; bad teen comedies, particularly Not Another Teen Movie for being yet another teen movie. |
| Favorite TV Shows: | Buffy the Vampire Slayer; Firefly; LOST; Battlestar Galactica (latecomer still catching up); Top Chef; So You Think You Can Dance; Mythbusters; Profit. |
| Favorite Quotes: | "Give a man a fire and he's warm for the day, but set fire to him and he's warm for the rest of his life." — Terry Pratchett (Jingo: A Discworld Novel) "Go then, there are other worlds than these." — Stephen King |
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March 4

Allison Martine wrote on Festus Porcupine's scratchpad.
March 3

Allison Martine added Headin' for Armageddon!, Chapter 2: The office (edit 2) to her reading list.

Allison Martine added Headin' for Armageddon!, Chapter 1: Dennis (Edit 3) to her reading list.
February 22

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On Bound, by dnmtwthlsrbm: I agree with Hans and Stewart. If your character is
intentionally schizophrenic, that may make some sense, but as it is... Read →
On Letter to God., by Hans von Lieven: Can't really critique a sentence, because it's not a
story. It's a sentence.
One note, though: Cum is... Read →
On Heavenly Delights, by LN Harte: I'll echo Stewart's crit on the overt similarity to the Toy
Story characters being distracting and confusing. A... Read →
On Snowed In, by Jane Adrienne: Good piece, Jane! I see you've already edited it a ton,
and it looks like the suggestions other folks had made have... Read →





















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