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Shilohx7

140 • Paper Jockey

Sorry about the mediocre rating on "I wanna." I don't know what happened as I click on the fifth star. It is definitely not a two star poem. Great job. Shilohx7

James Barger

45 • Pencil Pusher

Thank you for your critique Andrea - I'm glad that you enjoyed the piece. I hope to return the favor to you soon! ~ James

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Thanks for reading "You Notice." I'm glad you enjoyed it

pikachufannumber1

64 • Pencil Pusher

Thanks for critiquing my poem. I personally don't think it flows better with those changes but that is a matter of opinion I suppose. On your last little comment, It would be impossible to start the last line with " 'cause" because the poem is an acrostic.

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Name:	Andrea L. Bois
Sex:	Female
Location:	San Diego, CA.
Birthday:	Sep. 24, 2008
Words Written:	327
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About Me

Occupation:	Telephone Operator
About Me:	"Be who you are Say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, And those who matter don't mind." ~~Dr. Seuss "We are not human beings on a spiritual journey. We are spiritual beings on a human journey." ~~Pierre Teilhard de Chardin I am a writing, singing, jewelry-making free spirit! I believe you get what you give. I am a Writer, a Daughter, a Sister, a very proud Aunt and a best friend. I love my family and my three fur babies and I'm a die-hard Red Sox fan.
Interests:	Writing, singing, riding Harleys
Publications:	http://www.helium.com/users/441386
Favorite Books:	Tarzan Of The Apes Seth Speaks:The Eternal Validity Of The Soul
Favorite Movies:	Lonesome Dove Armageddon
Favorite TV Shows:	Dexter Lost
Favorite Quotes:	"I can always be distracted by love, but eventually I get horny for my creativity." ~~Gilda Radner
Loves:	Pearls and Leather and Harley's
Hates:	Weakness and liars

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Dec. 18, 2008

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Andrea L. Bois wrote a critique for Your Cigarette Turned Me Yellow, by Dog Face.

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Andrea L. Bois commented on Flight of the Imagination, by Brava Avani.

Jul. 27, 2008

Andrea L. Bois edited I WANNA.

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Andrea L. Bois commented on GUEST FOR A SEASON, by Shilohx7.

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Andrea L. Bois wrote a critique for A Visionary's Vision, by James Barger.

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Latest Works

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I WANNA

trust, love, romance, poetry

This is a poem about new love. When you enter into a new relationship with someone you think is wonderful and they return your feelings.
ALL my poems are inspired by my late husband, the Love-of-my-life. » Read...

My Soul Is Broken

love, sorrow, grief

This is written In Loving Memory of my late husband. » Read...

SKIN

romance, poetry, love

Love Poem » Read...

Latest Critiques and Comments

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On Your Cigarette Turned Me Yellow, by Dog Face: I like this, a lot. There is only one thing I would change and that is the fourth line of the last verse, it doesn'... » Read more...

On A Visionary's Vision, by James Barger: I like this a lot. It evokes vivid images and makes me think. But I'm still striving, after reading it several... » Read more...

On Tell Me What You See, by James Barger: This is excellent. I love it. My favorite parts are: But I'm waiting for the smile that fits the arc of these tire... » Read more...