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No problem keep posting. Sorry my critique morphed into symbols and stuff. Would you like me to go back and clear it up so it would be easier to understand? Just let me know.
Andrea- consider me deprived of another bias- my comments about romance had more to do with my sometimes narrow view than reality-- and thank you --the brownies were great
Thanks so much for reading my work. I was worried about all that background so I'm glad my instincts were right.
Thanks also for the details with commas and quotes not my strong suit.
Thanks also for the details with commas and quotes not my strong suit.
Andrea no problem 
It was a pleasure to read your work You'll notice if you read my work that I'm the queen of the comma, and I may mess up the 'it' thing here and there :: wink ::
It was a pleasure to read your work You'll notice if you read my work that I'm the queen of the comma, and I may mess up the 'it' thing here and there :: wink ::
thank you very much for reading my work. Your comments were helpful.
Jegattack
Jegattack
Thanks for the review! Can't wait to get to rewriting.
Hi Andrea
Thanks so much for your review of Under The Same Sky. I appreciate you taking the time to offer me your insight.
Thanks so much for your review of Under The Same Sky. I appreciate you taking the time to offer me your insight.
Thank you so much for your response to my writing! Any feedback is great and I appreciate your encouragement. I agree with the suggestions you made and it is always good to look at your own work through fresh eyes
That's ok, i am about to delete it soon anyway, and then publish Chapter two, (I almost have enough karma)
Andrea:
I do so need you. Y'all inspire me to edit the livin' daylights out of a piece before I post it. Otherwise I just slop around lazily. Thanks for your kind critique on "Date." You're right - I was writing from the heart.
I do so need you. Y'all inspire me to edit the livin' daylights out of a piece before I post it. Otherwise I just slop around lazily. Thanks for your kind critique on "Date." You're right - I was writing from the heart.
| Name: | Andrea DiPasquale |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | VIRGINIA |
| Birthday: | Jun 1, 1954 |
| Words Written: | 5,828 |
About Andrea
| Occupation: | High school library tech. |
| About Me: | Grew up in Maryland, spent twenty years in the military, four active, then spouse. Stationed in Greece, England, California. Ended up in Virginia. 3 wonderful children, two gorgeous grandchildren. |
| Interests: | Writing, scrapbooking, gardening, reading. |
| Publications: | None |
| Favorite Books: | Too many to list. I will read just about anything. Favorites: romance, mystery, sci-fi, young adult. Least favorite: Fantasy |
| Favorite Movies: | Way to many to list. Just like books, I'll watch just about anything. |
| Favorite TV Shows: | So many to chose! Star Trek, Lost, Bones, Heroes, House, CSI Las Vegas, and an old one-Highlander. |
| Loves: | My family |
| Hates: | Pretentious people. |
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March 2
Andrea Lynn posted The Greatest of These is Love, Chapter 3.
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Nov 19, 2009
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After many years of separation, Jordi and Sasha meet again. Read →
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In this chapter I introduce the second main character, Jordi. Read →
2024 words - 3 critiquesIt's been quite a while since I have been active on this site, so I thought I would start over. For those who may have read this in the past, it has been tweaked a lot.
Anyway, in this chapter we meet our main character Sasha on an archeological dig... Read →
Anyway, in this chapter we meet our main character Sasha on an archeological dig... Read →
1389 words - 5 critiquesLatest Critiques and Comments
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On Pair of Jokers, Chapter 1: Shuffle the Deck, by Flamefire123: First off, welcome to the site. This is a great place to learn
and grow as a writer. I also love Nora Roberts, so we have
som... Read →
Critique - Nov 19, 2009, 5:26pm - 668 words - 3.29 karma points
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On The Joy of Murder Chapter 1, by A.A. Nelson: I really loved the beginning of your story. It caught my
attention right off and I wanted to read more. Then the fatal
mistak... Read →
Critique - Nov 17, 2009, 8:11pm - 415 words - 1.14 karma points
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On Fright Fest at Red River City, Chapter 1, by Todd Randall Jordan: I think you might have a good premise for a story here, but you
really need to work on your tense and also stop just listing ... Read →
Critique - Nov 9, 2009, 5:12pm - 466 words - 2.48 karma points
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On The Kindness of Witches, Chapter 2, by ireneintheworld: this is going to be really short as you have done such a good
job. There were a few places where a turn of phrase threw me a
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Critique - Nov 9, 2009, 3:30pm - 122 words - 0.37 karma points
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