Hi, Please would you read my first ever poem, or my article on "RAPE". My work needs to be critiqued so I know how it is percieved and where I should improve. I would appreciate your input. Thank you and take care

Dude, I just read your new poem... coool I did a crit, but I don't know if I remembered to vote.... I finally got up the guts to post two poems that I wrote last night. Sure could use your input. TY,,, Dreamchaser

Ay yo, Angel! I have Lonely Heart posted up if you want to read it!

Come also read Passions of A Lovestruck, Black Winged, But Rather Tempted Kind of Angel. I do have the prologue, but please enjoy it!

Hello, Angel! I have Heart of Ice posted up for you if you wantto read it!

Hello! When you have time please read, The Boys of Summer -and tell me what you think.

Hey Brother, thanks a lot for the comment, and taking the time to check it out. Im really glad you liked it. You sound like some one i could talk to for hours to about the biz. Its def. a crazy world. ~Paul~

Angel,

Thank you so much for your blessing me. I'm thankful for you and how you've touched me. I'm thankful to God for your tranforming your trauma into a passionate masterpiece. May the peace of Christ be with you!

-Matthew

Bygones...absolutely!
When you get a chance I would love to read about the thoughts behind your poem. Post it as a critique and I'll check it out.
-Ben

thank you very much for your kind words

Thank you! Angels are usually what I write too, just 89% of the time. When you get the chance, read my stuff, just click my name and go to recently published works.

I absolutely loved your poems abouts angels and usch. No wonder how you got your name!! I wish to hear more of your, plus "Her Pretty Shoes" was great!

Oh my, I was surprised by your gift...thank you so much!!