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Hearts and Minds, Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Jealous Love

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My first (and only) novel; I've been working on it off and on for almost three years, and though I'm still not even close to finishing it, I'm getting closer with every word, right? :)

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Kassandra and Ladimira meet Naiosa, who seems determined to cause trouble.

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Chapter Four: Jealous Love 

 

 

 

 

“Who is she?” Ladimira eyed the newcomer with a venomous expression.

“Ladimira, Naiosa. Naiosa, Kassandra. Kassandra Naiosa. Naiosa, Ladimira. Good; now that everybody knows everybody else, let us get going.” Having said the introductions, Halan knew that his sister would not be content. He dropped his bag and proceeded to make a fire with the remainder of the firewood from the night before.

“A pleasure,” Naiosa said, grinning. “Your brother has told me so much about you.” She did not extend a hand, but stood there instead, grinning.

What is he thinking? Feeling obliged to show some kindness to this strange woman, Kassandra smiled politely as she had learned to do. “Yes, a pleasure. If you would please excuse me, I would like to have a word with my brother.” She stepped away and approached Halan, leaving Ladimira and Naiosa to themselves.

“Before you ask,” he said quickly, before she could speak, “we just met.”

“Who is she, Halan?”

“Naiosa. I made the introductions, did I not?”

She sighed. “But why is she here? With us?”

“That,” Halan told her, “is a long story.”

 

“So, how well do you know Halan?” Ladimira ventured, glancing back at the twins.

Naiosa smirked. “Quite well, actually. One could say, in fact, that he and I know the other’s deepest desire.”

Ladimira fumed inwardly.

Luckily, Kassandra returned. “May I…borrow you for a moment?” she asked, taking her friend by the arm and leading her away.

Naiosa shrugged and stepped closer to the small fire, then sat beside Halan.

 

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“She is terrible!”

She hushed her quickly. “Ladimira, calm down. I do not like her very much, either. But Halan trusts her, and he claims that she is going to help.”

“With what?”

Kassandra shrugged. “That he would not say. But if he will trust her, then should not we, too?”

Ladimira sighed in defeat. “Perhaps you are right. But I still do not like her.”

 

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She woke with a start. What was that sound? It sounds like…splashing. Odd. After a quick look around their shaggy camp, she counted the sleeping blobs on the ground. Shaking the fatigue from her lethargic limbs, Ladimira stood up and followed the sound.

She was lead to a small stream. The crystal blue water slipped effortlessly over the numerous shiny pebbles at the bottom. The little amount of light there was from the waning moon rained down and reflected upon the water’s surface. Ladimira held her breath. There in the moonlight, standing in the middle of the stream, stood the half-dressed figure of a man: dark and strong, with muscles that rippled down his chest in

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