On Red Shirt, by Shane Gannaway:       Shane! I enjoyed the poem quite a bit in its style and diction but I'm not sure if the structure you... » Read more...

On Untitled Story 1, by Carrie Griffin: Carrie! This piece was really well done! I liked pretty much everything about it and am hard pressed to offer any changes. Yo... » Read more...

On Three Minutes, by Carl Antonowicz: When I read this I imagined you reading it poetry slam style, since the formatting and the diction seemed to lend it self tow... » Read more...