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Jordan Griffin

86 • Pencil Pusher

hey Dave -
thanks for reviewing my other work 'Passenger'. Your opinion helps and those minor grammar problems make me look foolish, so thanks for pointing them out! I loved your work by the way, very good. Keep it up!

Laurie Paulsen

2329 • Laureate

hi, dave--
thank you for your constructive and reasoned critique of 'unearthed'. you gave me some great suggestions and a few ideas for where to take this story. i appreciate it!

Jordan Griffin

86 • Pencil Pusher

Hey man, thanks for reviewing my work. Yeah, I agree with you, it pretty much sucks, but I felt like posting it just to see. So thanks for being honest. Check out my other work if your interested, it's called 'Passenger' and I think you'll find it a little easier to cope with. I'll be sure to return the favor with yours!

Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith

1855 • Wordsmith

I'd be surprised if the name is a coincidence, so I'll go out on a limb and say hello fellow TheWebComicLister.

Name:	Dave Van Etten
Sex:	Male
Location:	PACNorthwest USA
Words Written:	432
Hottest Words:	letter, box, desk, york, envelope, return
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About Me

Occupation:	Illustrator. I draw little pictures for a living. I have two published children's books under my belt and a host of advertising pieces. I am self employed
About Me:	I draw, I teach, I write, I geek, I play MMORPG's. It's amazing I found a wife and got married.
Interests:	Uhm ... drawing, writing, teaching, geeking, gaming?
Publications:	As an author? None, that I want to draw any attention too. I have written advertising copy for years, and it has been published and even effective for its purpose. I self publish a web comic. Does that count?
Favorite Books:	The Host The Time Travelers Wife.
Favorite Movies:	Contact, To kill a Mockingbird, The Fifth Element, Brazil, The day the Earth Stood Still, When Worlds Collide.
Favorite TV Shows:	I don't watch much TV. I do like The Office from time to time.
Favorite Quotes:	Ideas are genius, not people. Some people can be sensitive to genius. They can guide us, show us the trail, show us where genius sleeps and where it eats. But genius never points at itself and says "Here I am."
Loves:	Creating stuff from the chaos.
Hates:	Chaos. Others people's chaos to be specific. My Chaos is the breeding ground for inspiration, everybody else's chaos is white noise. I know, everyone has a foible and mine is big and ugly. I live with it, why can't you?

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Dec. 10, 2008

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Artiste Gullible edited his critique of The Virgin Polyp, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith.

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Nov. 6, 2008

Artiste Gullible wrote a critique for Letters of Love (Bitterness), by The Geek.

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Harlem's Humidor

short story, flash fiction, cigar, president

A tribute to the election process and the foibles of man. This is a piece of flash fiction that I keep rewriting as I try to distill the essence down to the most powerful images and fewest words. The story contains a sexual situation but nothing grap... » Read...

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On The Virgin Polyp, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: I liked the arc of the story. It seemed well thought out and constructed. I have a few points that might (or might not?) make... » Read more...

On Letters of Love (Bitterness), by The Geek: When I choose to read something I am looking for something special. Oh, to be sure, there are things that I read every day th... » Read more...

On Passenger, by Jordan Griffin: Well, I should start out by saying that I am not a big fan of Kerouac Style. This should not be interpreted to mean that I am... » Read more...