Hey Ashley,
Thank you for the critique on "Rebuild" - it is one of those poems you are never sure how it will be received because the topic is so taboo still. I appreciate the positive feedback.

thank you reading my poem and your kind words, i have lots of poems like that one , ill be putting a new one soon ,

that was by far one of the most heart touching critiques I have ever received, thank you! I will definitely be writing for as long as I live, as I feel it's the only real talent that I possess (it'd be an awful shame to throw it away ). I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your critique! It was beautiful!

Hi Ashley,

Thank you so much for your kind words! They are very inspiring and I really appreciate you taking the time to write. I can't wait to read your stuff! (Sorry it has taken me so long to respond, I have been crazy busy and have not had much time to be on this site.)

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments on my poem The View. They were very encouraging!

Thank you for your comment. You can stop by my profile to read and critique my works sometime soo!