On Seasons, by Kayla Brady:  Yes, so I was really feeling this piece of work. I could really come out and show a side of you that maybe a lot of peo... » Read more...

On I've Lost the War, by Eli Hart:  Well done. Very good. You expressed youself in the best possible way. That was amazing. It was one of them poems that y... » Read more...

On Pretender, by chris:   When you ask me how I am only happiness you'll find    I am also a great pretender actually I think I ma... » Read more...

On This Night, by xjruss:   If there were a drug, to make this misery fade I would pay any amount, I would pay it any day    Welcome to ... » Read more...

On Letting Go, by Cody Morales:  Wow. I sure am glad I'm not that girl. I guess everyone falls out of love somtimes. I wish people didn't but th... » Read more...

On Saying Goodbye, by Caroline Lowe:  As Annabella has already said before that she doesn't think she ever told her grandmother she loved her I didn'... » Read more...

On Forgotten (Lest We), by Joshua Allen Tompkins:  What a way to express your feelings towards 9/11. It was a very tragic event and to this day I still pray for the lost ... » Read more...

On Maybe If and You Wish, by Nikki Williams:  I'm going to start off with the "Maybe if". This is the one that touched me the most. Recently I've been in a s... » Read more...

On SKIN, by Andrea L. Bois:  The best part about reading someone else's works is being able to bring your opinion to it at the end. I have to sa... » Read more...

On tears, by missunderstood:  OK good job. Of course people go through rough times when it has to do with love. I always say there are more fish in t... » Read more...

On Rebuild, by Kathleen Dineen:  Your piece definitley almost brought me to heart felt tears. It was very moving and motivating. You bring up the subjec... » Read more...

On Disquise of Hatred, by Erik Walker:  You have definitely motivated me to go beyond and do more with my work than what I've been doing. I feel that you p... » Read more...

On Maybe You've Heard Of It, by Carlos Perez:   Wow! What an amazing piece. Very deep and emotional....I've been through situations alot like this one and yo... » Read more...

On Abuse, by Racheal Lynn:   And again she ends up the one getting hit. She doesn't know how he turned out like this; He was so gentle from thi... » Read more...

On Given, by Ashley:   This is not an intervention. I'm not asking, I'm telling. This will stop whether you like it or not. It's ... » Read more...

On The View, by K. L. Raynor:  Great job. Your grammar is terrific and I love the way you put your peices together. You make it very understandable. Y... » Read more...

On Undone, by Paul Ciaccio:   if i could ask just this what am i supposed to do   Let me say that this was definitely amazing. I love... » Read more...

On Warchild, by penpa:  I absolutely love this. I've grown up seeing this kind of stuff throughout my life and let me tell ya it ain't ... » Read more...

On No Room, by Connie:  This peice, no matter what people say, was excellent. Let me tell you why. Millions of ladies go through this situation... » Read more...

On Reach out your hands, by Barrett Alexander:   "No one said life would be easy But consequently no one said it would be this hard either   "  I can tell by... » Read more...

On Fairytale Princess, by Connie:   "Who would ever dream that life could be so cruel but I found out that day you were stripped from me. What was taken f... » Read more...

On A Madman's Whisper, by Angel w o Wings:   "coveting coins in a grimy pocket of fortuitous panning, fatefully spent on yesterday's dreams, and tomorrow's... » Read more...

On Boomerang, by Bob Onnie:   "Through hell, through earth, to heaven’s stair, Then back again, as never there."    I love this peice of... » Read more...

On Requiem for a Microbial Armada, by Bob Onnie:  This poem is, in a way, a relatable peice of work. You are extremely gifted and talented. I like that there's a lit... » Read more...