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babs!! first, you rock. 
second, thanks so much for your input on my blobular nano chapter! you're generous and i appreciate it, being so fragile right now in the midst of all the craziness. i'm definitely saving your comments for later, for when i return and stretch all this out, hopefully clarify setting and characters and . . .well, you know. all that stuff. i'm relieved it's halfway readable at this point!!
and i'll take you up on that offer to buy this puppy when it's finished.
thanks so much for the encouragement--i'm fired up now! wooh!
second, thanks so much for your input on my blobular nano chapter! you're generous and i appreciate it, being so fragile right now in the midst of all the craziness. i'm definitely saving your comments for later, for when i return and stretch all this out, hopefully clarify setting and characters and . . .well, you know. all that stuff. i'm relieved it's halfway readable at this point!!
and i'll take you up on that offer to buy this puppy when it's finished.
thanks so much for the encouragement--i'm fired up now! wooh!
Thanks so much for your critique. This will really help me as I work on polishing this novel. I really appreciate your comments about the tone and will solicit comments from my other readers about that.
The novel will focus on the Citizen Genet affair and the conspiracy involving George Rogers Clark and others to wrest Louisiana away from Spain.
Thanks again!
The novel will focus on the Citizen Genet affair and the conspiracy involving George Rogers Clark and others to wrest Louisiana away from Spain.
Thanks again!
Thanks for the critique on my story. I am working to trim it down now and fix the errors. I hope to have the edited version up soon. Thanks for your help!
Babs, I wanted to thank you for your suggestions on my Curiosity Did Not Kill the Cat. I took many of your suggestion into consideration. I did want to say that you asked about the word lovely near the beginning, and that was supposed to be sarcasm. But thanks a lot for you're help, I know I have grammar issues.
-Kayla Brady
-Kayla Brady
have a good trip!
That picture was on a poster that was in my freshman English class in high school, and I found it again on the Internet.
Hello Babs,
Thanks for looking at my Fairy story. Never apologize for a free copy edit. I appreciate it. I'm glad that you liked the story and that you have read my others. I can think of no greater compliment than coming back for more. So thank you. Thank you very much.
-Ben
Thanks for looking at my Fairy story. Never apologize for a free copy edit. I appreciate it. I'm glad that you liked the story and that you have read my others. I can think of no greater compliment than coming back for more. So thank you. Thank you very much.
-Ben
hi, babs--
thanks for your good suggestions and encouraging comments on my chicken story! muchas gracias!
(i'll get to fixing those errors right away!)
thanks for your good suggestions and encouraging comments on my chicken story! muchas gracias!
(i'll get to fixing those errors right away!)
Thanks for reading my story and your detailed and honest critique. I have a tendency to get wordy when I create my worlds on the fly, as I did here. Also, you pointed out some spots I didn't realize were unclear that I will try to improve. Thanks!
Very true, very true.
| Name: | Babs Griswold |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | Coatepec, Veracruz, Mexico |
| Birthday: | Mar. 28, 1934 |
| Words Written: | 11177 |
| Hottest Words: | vera, beth, asked, barracks, girls, px |
About Me
| Occupation: | art historian, librarian, teacher, divemaster |
| About Me: | email: babsgriswold@yahoo.com skype: john and babs |
| Interests: | weaving, clothes design, knitting, crochet; scuba diving, tennis, Spanish |
| Publications: | Museum catalogs, articles about artists |
| Favorite Books: | Anything by Barry Lopez, Peter S. Beagle, Donald E. Westlake, Richard Shelton, John McPhee |
| Favorite Movies: | none |
| Favorite TV Shows: | Don't watch |
| Favorite Quotes: | "Age is an issue of mind over matter. If you don't mind, it doesn't matter." -- Mark Twain |
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November 12

Babs Griswold replied to the thread NaNoWriMo!.
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Babs Griswold replied to the thread NaNoWriMo!.

Babs Griswold wrote a critique for Blood Runs Wild and Deep, Chapter 1: Forces of Nature, by Laurie Paulsen.
November 8

Babs Griswold wrote on N L Snowden's scratchpad.
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Babs Griswold wrote on Maia Groshong's scratchpad.
November 6

Babs Griswold wrote a critique for The Fairest Portion of the Globe (opening for novel in progress), by Frances Hunter.
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Babs Griswold wrote on Maia Groshong's scratchpad.

Babs Griswold wrote on Maia Groshong's scratchpad.

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On Que Sera Sera (con't.), Chapter 2, by Phedre: Wow! I am so impressed! I am also very glad I
read Chapter 1 before it went away, although I didn't get... » Read more...
On Blood Runs Wild and Deep, Chapter 1: Forces of Nature, by Laurie Paulsen: Good, so far. A few things to say about your timeline,
though. It might be confusing to the reader to retrogress
... » Read more...
On Harlem's Humidor, by Artiste Gullible: Excellent.
I disagree with the critique that said "It was New York" was
unnecessary. I think that sentence... » Read more...
On The Fairest Portion of the Globe (opening for novel in progress), by Frances Hunter: Can you sustain this level for an entire novel? How
extraordinary if you can! As near as I can tell (not be... » Read more...





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