Many thanks, Babs! xx

Hey, thanks for the detailed critique on my piece (and thanks for reading it in general). I really appreciated all of your kind words.

Thank you for the kind welcome. I'm glad to find people who have some things in common, even if it's as simple as root beer, chocolate, and crocheting. ;D

Hi, Babs!
Thank you so much for your indepth critique/editing of Chapter 5. I cut all the 'missing' details you mentioned because I thought it would be too much, but I'll put it back. I'm send you a pvt msg explaining why the 'morcherry' is not mentioned in the last few chapters.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD As always,a helpful, in-depth and thorough crit from the very best. Thank you Babs, I appreciate it.

thanks, Babs, for your very helpful critique. I will be posting a re-edit soon, with your comments taken into account. You are on my reading list for a return critique.
regards
Sooboo

Wow, I guess it's a small world! I hope my comments helped you!

Thanks for the stellar crit It really kicked my a** and put the piece into real good shape. Excellent as always Babs!

Babs, thanks again for the great crit, it's exactly what I was looking for. Great stuff! Thanks, CT

Hey Babs,
I haven't heard from you in a while. Thanks for reading Scape Artist. My best work, really? You're too kind. I wrote it in response to the criticism that my recent pieces have had no setting, so I tried to make that the soul of the piece. Like almost everything I post, I almost chickened out at the last minute, but did end up getting it out there. Thank you for your kind words and good tips.
-Ben