On Fill The World With Beauty, by Casper:  This story is very well written. I particularly like the narrator, providing us a very introspective look into his thou... » Read more...

On Daniel Sans, by Israel Cruz:  This is a very original story, but there are a few suggestions I have for your work. To start off with, I would suggest... » Read more...

On Reprise, Chapter 2: [Hollow Bones; Feathers and Knives], by Circus:  Seems like you wasted no time putting up your second chapter. Love the tenacity. That being said here is yet another re... » Read more...

On Dead for a Ducat, Chapter 98: Dead for a Ducat, by Paul de Fleury: This works seems to be really well done. I like the sophisticated word choice, but I was somewhat confused. The events seem ... » Read more...

On Reprise, Chapter 1: [Silent Night, Holy Night], by Circus:  This particular story seems to be shaping up pretty well. There are no serious grammatical errors worth pointing out an... » Read more...

On Love Warriors, Chapter 1: Amen, by Steven E.A.: Once again, you have graced us with a wonderful combination of words. You introduce us to a new character, Cheryl Divine. And... » Read more...

On The War of the Angels, by Vinny Balducci:  I really liked your prologue and read Chapter One. But since you have posted a lot of content I'll offer my thought... » Read more...

On The Interpreter: Prologue & Chapter 1, Chapter 1: The Assignment, by Brandon McInnis:  I meant to comment on this work a long time ago. However, technology thought otherwise. So without further delay I'... » Read more...

On Dissent, by Steven E.A.: Opening Comments  This is an original plot that creates a 1984-esque United States in which the government is the prima... » Read more...

On Prologue, by Steven E.A.:  This is an amazing work I have to say. So many times in the news we only hear about Islamic Extremism and never think t... » Read more...

On War, by Joseph Nagy:  I really liked this work. And since it seems to developed on the fly I is pretty damn good. And as a matter of fact I h... » Read more...

On The Chinese Job, Chapter 1: The Docks, by Joseph Nagy:  First off man, just want to say that I enjoyed the plot. It really sounds interesting and I can’t wait to read more. ... » Read more...