Thank you again for critiquing "Aubade"! You have an excellent eye, and I love to hear your speculation. Sadly, the entirety of the Heaven plot is mapped out, but your suggestion of something based on the Iblis story is very interesting, indeed, and I'm very sorry that I can't use it. Also, it's too bad that you mentioned City of Angels; I hate that movie! I also worry that the way angels work is too similar, but I think the context is different enough that it's okay. I don't really care; this idea has been brewing since before I saw that movie, anyway. I'm sorry I ramble so on your scratchpad! Thanks, and have a nice day.

Thank you so much for your critique of "Aubade"! It was unexpected and delightful. You made some interesting points. First, let me assure you that the physical laws relating to angels will be explained in future chapters. Also, you brushed on something very insightful when you spoke of Icharus's human nature, and connected it to his reason for falling. I'm really impressed, I never thought that so much meaning would be able to be picked up through a few words - well done. That insight even helped me; I hadn't realized before, but now I see that it's true; it's Icharus's humanity that makes him good, and the lack of it that makes the other angels pale in comparison. Thanks a lot for that, and I hope that maybe you'll like the next few chapters as I put them up. Thank you, thank you!

I'm glad it helped. And thanks for reading Love Warriors! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

P.S. I rule your wall, er, I mean scratchpad.

Thanks, again, for taking a look at the next chapter! I've been working on this for about a year now and I'm currently revising like crazy to work out the kinks. Your feedback helps out a lot! Thanks again!

Thanks for reading and critiquing both Dissent and my prologue. You gave some really use feedback and I appreciate it.