Thanks for your crit on "Adoration." The line about forgetting maybe NEEDS a that "makes me forget THAT your hands are priests." But even I knew not to put it there!
Thanks.

Hi, thanks for reading my story. I appreciate the feedback. It is only meant to be a short story, but maybe I'll try to come up with a longer storyline. There's no significance to the name Sarah in the story. I just liked the name, but maybe something more exotic is called for. Anyway thanks for reading. Cheers.

Hi Brigitte! I read your crit on Bone Health (and read the article, too). You have a good eye!
Welcome to the site, and hopefully you'll have plenty of karma soon so we can read your own stuff, too!

Thanks for the comment on my work! I really enjoyed yours because you seemed a bit confused and it was exactly what I wanted. I am going to take your advice into consideraton though.

Thank you for the compliment! I gather you're fairly new here, too. (Judging by your date of birth, you're fairly new EVERYWHERE - at least compared to me.)

Brigitte,
thanks for the critique. It looks like I have a lot of work to do on the beginning of this.

hi, brigitte--
welcome!
and thanks for adding me to your favorites--i'm sorry i don't have anything new for you to read, but when i do i'll come acallin', if that's okay.
have fun digging around the site, and don't hesitate to ask if you have any questions.
(WALL-E rocked!!!!)

Hey Brigitte! Nice to meet you...thanks for 'fanning' me!

No I get it. I didn't know the term for it but I had read Chaucer's Tales in high school and didn't realize that is what I was doing.

Frame Story?