Hi Bunniel -- sorry for being so late getting back to you. I find it very difficult to read & crit long works on screen, but I thoroughly enjoyed the opening to Ain't Nuthin' but the Devil. Good solid prose, great characters -- and most important, a good clear motivation set up from the outset. I'll try and to a more detailed crit in due course.

Bring it on,the final 2wives and then we rock and roll!

Zulu is first, followed by Xhosa in the spoken language statistics.

Miriam mama afrika, may she R.I.P!

Do u know the click song?
Igqirha lendlela nguqongqothwane!

Hi

Sister Jefferson,
how are things at the morcherry?

Impelaveki emnandi kuwe/a great weekend 2u!

Next week I'm going to try to whack through crits every day and do some catching up. I've a huge reading list right now so am just adding stuff on until then.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.

Any particular chapter you'd like me to focus on?

OK, I posted it as second draft. Thank you.

Oh, I edited it maybe I should resubmit it.

I edited the Trojan Belt if you want to see it.