Bunniel

Thank you so much for your kind and very useful critique. I get so carried away with the story that I know the punctuation and grammar suffers! which is why I'm on this site. I hope to read some of your work soon to repay the favour!

Bye for now

Anna x

Don't know if I'll see you but you'll probably see me there, like Pogo, "We have found the enemy and he is us."

HAAAhahahahaha!!
Bunny it is then. See you in the funny pages

It helped a lot. I've been writing a critique for my new manuscript and have come a long way. I'm going to use my newly refined query writing skills to work on the query you just critiqued. Thanks again.

I wish I knew you better, I have this irresistable urge to call you Bunny--I'm sorry
I have these italian friends who flaunt their culture as if their was some unified truth behind Italian culture but it's as varied as the food. African American culture, however, is exemplified in your work I think.

oh by the way... I enjoy Aint Nuthin but the Devil

Thanks for reaching out. The circle I am hoping to create is a place where black writers of all genres can develop a sense of community. So come on in!! and as for the e lynn reference--sorta kinda.. very differenty types of characters and perspectives

Belated thanks for your comments regarding The Jazz Cage! Thanks for your vote of confidence.

Thanks for the wonderful comments. You've given me a big boost.

Hi Bunni, thanks for your kind comments and for adding your insights on my work. Much appreciated!