Hey! I wriote the second chapter of "A Thirst For Revenge"! Will you please read and critique it?? PLEASE! I've been trying to get it on here for months, but it kept saying I didn't have enough karma points!
Please read it!

Hi, I have read some of your work as well as your critique. Please would you be so kind as to read some of mine. It seems to take so long for others to read and comment and especially critique, which I need. Am I doing something wrong?
Hoping you would respond, warmth.
Sherry

Hey - I'm still not seeing your "Sweet Mary" on leafio.com . Do you have any other similar ones which are not posted on scribophile.com - I would love to see them on my site.

I have another work for you C. Crone that is about Edgar Allan Poe, come and read/comment on it!

thankyou for your comment and i like the reviews i get on that poem and Ariadne and I came up with the idea to take the poem and turn it into a novel/short story. Only the first chapter is available to the public if you like the first then please tell me and I will add you to the list to let you read the rest. But if you like it please tell...oh yeah it is a new draft so ignore typos and punctuation and crap like that haha!

I have Tragic Hearts Chapter One done. Fell free to read and critique them!

Hello, C. Crone. I'm glad you liked my first chapter of my novel. That chapter I had to edit over a million times, but it had better ratings now. I will contact you here when I have that chapter done. For now, you can just click my name, scroll down my profile for recently published works. Pick any one you want!

None of my poems have spacing, so I did not notice if you could not... ;; I assume you have tried all the obvious stuff, so I will not bother to insult your intelligence with suggestions.

It's supposed to be sung slowly but with a constant rhythm. Glad you liked it.

Thanks! You have no idea how much I needed the drink! lol