C.J. Lasa
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Hi CJ,
Thanks for your critique of frog. If you think my story is creepy you should check out stuff by HP Lovecraft, whose tone and writing style influences my horror-y stuff a lot. The biritishisms were there because the narrator is british and the story is set in England. Thanks again!
Thanks for your critique of frog. If you think my story is creepy you should check out stuff by HP Lovecraft, whose tone and writing style influences my horror-y stuff a lot. The biritishisms were there because the narrator is british and the story is set in England. Thanks again!
thanks for taking a look at Keep it Cool. I've been to busy to look at anything at the moment, but if I get a chance in the future, I'll look at some of your stuff.
C.J.,
Thank you for your critique of Apple Tree. For the record I'm just as interested in the feelings and memories my stories evoke as formal critiques. Anything is helpful. So again, thanks.
-Ben
Thank you for your critique of Apple Tree. For the record I'm just as interested in the feelings and memories my stories evoke as formal critiques. Anything is helpful. So again, thanks.
-Ben
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| Name: | Cayla Iacolino |
| Sex: | Female |
| Location: | USA |
| Birthday: | Sep. 5, 1989 |
| Words Written: | 1905 |
| Hottest Words: | jack, hand, kitchen, floor, knife, napier |
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About Me
| Occupation: | Student, Grocery Store Clerk, writer, |
| About Me: | To accurately explain myself would take WAY to much effort then I am willing to put forth at the moment. But since not telling you anything totally undermines the point of having a profile in the first place, I have to tell you something don't I ? Well, Here it goes: I'm 19, from the American North East. I'm politically left leaning (though I don't really ascribe to anyone party- So I'm independent.) Religiously, I was raised Catholic, but now I'm what I guess can be called an Deist. |
| Interests: | World War I, Drawing, Art, Video Games, Comic Books Anime, Medieval History/Culture, History in General, supernatural/paranormal stuff, Theology. |
| Publications: | None |
| Favorite Books: | Collected Poems of Wilfred Owen, Nineteen Eighty Four, One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest, Catcher in the Rye, Johnny Got His Gun, Thumbsucker, The Family, Atonement, Arkham Asylum: A Serious House on Serious Earth, Regeneration. |
| Favorite Movies: | Dark Knight, 10 Things I Hate About You, Back to the Future, The Omen, , Stigmata, SubUrbi@, Ever After, Dogma, Clerks, V For Vendtta, Kingdom of Heaven,The Crow,Joyeux Noel, A Knights Tale, Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure,Say Anything, Juno, States Evidence, The God Father, A Bronx Tale, Casablanca, Stalag 17, Ed Wood, Sleepy Hallow, Across The Universe, 12 Monkeys, Thumbsucker, Casanova, Pleasantville, The Wedding Singer, Mermaids, Romeo+Juliet, SLC Punk,and Interview With the Vampir |
| Favorite TV Shows: | I surf The History, SiFi or Discovery Channels, Fuse, VH1, Starz, HBO, Showtime, Sundance Channel, IFC Toon Disney, Nicktoons Network. |
| Favorite Quotes: | "I am the enemy you killed, my friend. I knew you in this dark: for so you frowned "Yesterday through me as you jabbed and killed. I parried; but my hands were loath and cold. Let us sleep now...." "Jesus was a Liberal" "Whatever Doesn't Kill You, Simply Makes you Stranger." "Men never do evil so completely and cheerfully as when they do it from religious conviction." |
| Loves: | Wilfred Owen,History, Drawing, Writing, Anime, Music, Live Action Role Playing, Philosophy,90% of all rock music. Italian, Mexican and Chinese Food. Sour Candies, Heath Legder, Robert Deniro, Al Pacino, Willem Defoe. Comedy, Period Films, Chocolate Cheese Cake, epic classical music, artists who died young and are of the British persuasion. |
| Hates: | Rap/"Emo" music, "reality" shows, Catholic School, shopping cart retrieval, The phrase, "The costumer is always right." most of my costumers(because they're exceedingly ignorant), Conservatives, Silent Fims, westerns, war. When people fail to tell me important things. When people bug me ad nauseam about things that I obviously don't care about. That a person who goes to school with me is almost a carbon copy my archnemesis |
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On Frog, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith:
Well, let’s see.
For starters, this was an amazing story all around.
You made great use of description, feeling and... » Read more...
On Apple Tree, by Ben Jacobson:
I liked it quite a bit. In fact, I thought it
was awesome. You’ve successfully brought on to the written page the
ex... » Read more...
On Game Over, by Lixfer:
Although you’re writing is good, your story as
a whole is extremely lacking. The fact that you’ve gone down the
a-... » Read more...
On Keep it Cool, Chapter 1, by Nick Krupp: I’m
not really sure of when this story takes place.But I’m getting the
impression that it’s early to mid 90’s. If tha... » Read more...