OMG! I know this is totally random (and weird) but your TV show tastes mirror mine almost exactly (except I haven't had TV in the last 4 years, so some of your pics I've never seen. But to see Buffy, Farscape, Sarah Connor, Sanctuary, Supernatural ALL in the same sentence almost makes me sigh. I'm not weird, really.

No way to comment on the fairies/angels story now so I'll do it here. Everybody else did nitpicky stuff so I'll settle for the good bits, I loved it. I definately want more. I would agree with the others on spelling/grammar etc, but the story is SOLID!

oh yes. very much so. how are you, by the way? what's been keeping you offline?

Well enough, well, really well actually, i've got another chapter in my computer and one more in the works, then the REAL plot is finally going to begin. Oh, and look forward to seeing the watcher do what he does best, within the next two chapters. Oh, you're gonna love it! Twists abound! HAHAHAH!
Sorry, i'm giddy. Seriously giddy.

And the next. And the next. And the next. Lol

Next chapter of indigo is up!

Glad to help.

Thanks for the once-over on both of my works! I didn't mean to have that much vagueness in Subvert City. They are supposed to be humans, just dehumanized by the position and the name given to them. I'll try to make that clearer in my next draft. I appreciate any nit-picks you can give me. Is there any work in particular of yours that you'd like me to critique?

Its all done now. I'm glad your okay with the nit-picking cause I really did .

Thanks for the crit on the Mister Syndicate. It's actually going to be an Urban Fantasy, it's just taking a bit to get there. You had some valuable advice. I appreciate your time.
-Ben