Hello Carter,
Welcome to Scrib. Thanks for looking at MGM. Yeah the title doesn't make much sense. I actually titled it before I wrote it and when it became first person I never bothered to change it. I'll definitely rename it in my next draft.
Thanks,
-Ben

thank you for your lovely comments on my 'high tide' poem, carter. i'm all squishy with warm delight, now.

hi, carter--
welcome! i perused your profile, and have to agree with you on kd lang--amazing vocalist. (how do you feel about andres segovia?)
i look forward to reading your work!

Thanks for the critique. I know, my grammar sucks. And its not that I think the chapter is too long for a book, just to post. I know most people won't want to read 7 pages, and thanks for taking the time to do so. I will try to shorten them in the future.