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i've been checking it out this morning--looks like a supportive community! my name there is lala68.

hi, cathy--
i'm so pleased you liked my critique, and found it helpful.

(i don't know why we can't print critiques...good question!)
i've just finished visiting the critiquecircle website, and created a free membership there. looks good--thanks for the tip!!

Hello, Cathy! I did like your critique on my story. Do you wanna read Passions of a Formerly Love Struck But Tempted Kind of Angel?

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Cathy-
Sorry if the critique sounded a bit.. disjointed? I was in class while I was writing it. Oops..
Thanks as well for your comments on my work. That story was meant as a one-shot and wasn't really intended to be well-developed. Kind of hard to explain what inspired it. Feel free to read my other stuff. Your comments and suggestions are definitely welcome. I'll try to be sure to do the same for you.
Nice to meet someone else on the site. I feel a little isolated since I'm somewhat new here.
Happy writing,
-dnm

Hello, Cathy! Wanna read Heart of Ice, part 5 sometime on my profile? I hope that you enjoy it before I get to finish it and I need a very high vote on it so that I can publish it as a great short story book!

Hello, Cathy! Wanna read Heart of Ice now?

hi, cathy--
you are more than welcome, darlin! i'm glad i could be a help.

i'm eager to see what you do with the story.
ooh! and this friday's story, too--you have any ideas yet?

Hello, Cathy. On Flash Fiction Fridays I have written Heart of Ice, try to read it today or tomorrow!

Hello, Cathy. You may notice that I may be absent for Flash Fiction Fridays this friday because I am doing a childrens short story in progress called Heart of Ice. In order to see itk, you must first click my name, scroll to recently published works and you will see it. Tell me how it is ok?

hi, cathy--
you're welcome!
reading was a pleasure.

Name:	Catherine Carlson
Sex:	Female
Location:	Skidmore, Texas
Words Written:	3100
Hottest Words:	ring, remember, cats, kids, edna, head

About Me

Occupation:	retired
About Me:	I live in South Texas 50 miles from Corpus Christi. My hubby and I have a farm in the country. I am a musician in our church band, I like all types of music, and am an avid animal lover. We have tame chickens, five cats and four goldfish. I would have more animals if we could afford it, but we are both retired, and money is tight. My writing is all Stream of Consciousness. It's the only way I can write. Most of my writing is short stories of all generes, and Flash Fiction.
Interests:	I like writing, reading, lots of reading, playing music. and excercising. I am also a member of Critique Circle.
Publications:	None yet
Favorite Books:	The Heart Shaped Box by Joe Hill, All of Lisa Jacksons books, Most Stephen King books and books by Bentley Little
Favorite Movies:	1408, Dream Catcher, The Pursuit of Happyness,
Favorite TV Shows:	Ghost Whisperer, Ghost Hunters, Dog Whisperer, How To Look Good Naked, Haunted History
Favorite Quotes:	"There is an Indian legend...when a human dies there is a bridge he must cross to enter into heaven. At the head of that bridge waits every animal he encountered during his lifetime. The animals decid which humans may cross the bridge...and which are turned away." Unknown "It's late and you're rambling." unknown
Loves:	Writing, making music and animals. Also I like exciting things. It's hard for me to do the same thing over and over again. Christianity is a big part of my life. I'm a born again Christian and take my faith seriously.
Hates:	Bigoted, gossipy people. I try to act Christian like to them, but it's hard.

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Cathy Carlson wrote a critique for A Small World, by Karissa.

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Some antiques aren't what they seem. A simple ring has mysterious powers. » Read...

Still As A Statue

flash fiction, fantasy

A man is fed up with his life and takes an unusual way out. Has been critiqued before, but not rewritten. Needs work. » Read...

Ghost Writer

ghost story

A paranormal tale about an old woman, her past, and an old house. This needs work, but the plot is mainly what I' m concerned with now. I'll flesh it out on the rewrite. » Read...

Volunteers

poetry

A portrait of depression and hoplessness. This is a poem I wrote a long time ago, in a fit of jealousy. » Read...

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On A Small World, by Karissa: Hi Karissa, Your story is beautiful. I could feel all the emotion you must have put into writing it.. I found mys... » Read more...

On My Boyfriend's A Vampire!, by Ariadne President: Hi Ariadne, Your story is as fun to read, as it must have been to write. To be honest, I think this is one of your best... » Read more...

On Honeymoon in Hell, by Kieran Thomson: This story is indescribable. You've done an excellent job bringing so much reality to a depressing situation.... » Read more...