Charles Cairone
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Thank you very much for your in depth critique, hope you enjoy further installments
Charles, thank you for your feedback. You are absolutely correct about the style and idea of this short story (All I Wanted To Say To You). It is nice to hear that this resonates. I appreciate your grammar suggestions too!
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Thank you for the critique. It was very helpful. I have been told before that I use too many "she said" tags so I'll work on that. And yes, commas are a very weak point for me. I feel I'm more aware now in the stuff I've been writing recently so thanks for your help.
Welcome to the Art of Novel Critique Charles. 
I've had dealings with Writer's Literary Agency -they are under investigation by Fl AG for fraud. Don't walk away - RUN & FAST!
More info if needed.
More info if needed.
Thank you for the critique. What started as a short story in 3 POV's is now becoming a novel.
What started as a short story in 3 POV's is now becoming a novel.
Welcome to the site, btw.
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| Name: | Charles Cairone |
| Sex: | Male |
| Location: | Pittsburgh, PA |
| Birthday: | Jul 18, 1989 |
| Words Written: | 3,652 |
| Hottest Words: | pete, feel, felt, eyes, thought, michael |
About Charles
| Occupation: | Cook |
| Interests: | Extremely interested in music and music composition, writing, artistic film, philosophy, etc. |
| Websites: | recartists.com/cairone |
| Publications: | None yet |
| Favorite Books: | Moby Dick, 100 Years of Solitude, The Old Man and the Sea, Infinite Jest, etc. |
| Favorite Movies: | Eraserhead, Taxi Driver, Magnolia, Punch Drunk Love, 2001: A Space Odyssey, Pi, Inland Empire, etc. |
| Hates: | People who are easily bored |
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February 18
Charles Cairone deleted Working Title, Chapter 2: Chapter 2.
February 14
Charles Cairone posted Working Title, Chapter 2: Chapter 2.
Charles Cairone wrote on gary wedlund's scratchpad.
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February 13
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February 12
Charles Cairone wrote a critique for Julie's Story, Chapter 12: Coming Into Her Own, by Jeannine Dudzinski.
February 11
Charles Cairone wrote on Danielle Rasmussen's scratchpad.
Charles Cairone wrote a critique for The Talented, Chapter 4: St. Joseph, by Danielle Rasmussen.
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An introduction to four of the seven main characters of the novel. Read →
3652 words - 3 critiques
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On Working Title, Chapter 1: Introduction, by Charles Cairone: To Gary,
First of all, thank you so much for spending so much of your time
reading and critiquing my piece. I wanted t... Read →
On Julie's Story, Chapter 12: Coming Into Her Own, by Jeannine Dudzinski: Opening CommentsJust as a preliminary note, this is the first chapter I've read, so I apologize for anything I may not unders... Read →
Critique - February 12, 2:36am - 236 words - 1.35 karma points
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On All I Wanted To Say To You, by Art A: Opening CommentsI like the idea of the unsent email. It's definitely something we've all done. Just as a preface,... Read →
Critique - February 11, 11:46pm - 161 words - 1.13 karma points
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On Old Men Wearing Shoes, by Ava Stewart: Inline CritiqueI always wondered if I would die alone.
It's a common thought, I guessconsider period here and new sentence, ... Read →
Critique - February 11, 3:05pm - 173 words - 1.14 karma points
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