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On The Monster, by Arianna Roberts: Very intriguing and interesting. great visual imagery and I
really saw the character referred to in the first few lines.... » Read more...
On In the Face of the Dead, by Richard Rowell: I liked the opening rhyme of waste and taste and lust and
entrust and would personally have liked to see this run throu... » Read more...
On My Old House, by Margaret Six: The introduction was intriguing and generated a lot of
curiosity. I do think though that it could be a little more
powe... » Read more...
On Taking off the mantle of mental illness, by Debbie Kerr: I really like the opening and contrast between drafty
and crowded, and the description and use of words around a
p... » Read more...
On Lunchbreak, by Emelie: I liked the opening and found it motivated me to want to find
out more. I was interested in what followed.
I would like to kn... » Read more...
On My Boyfriend's A Vampire!, by Ariadne President: I liked this story and found it quite captivating. The
descriptions of what was going on were good and really helped to
paint... » Read more...