Hey Christine,
Thanks for dropping in on my poem, and I look forward to seeing more of yours as well...

Christine, thanks for your critique! It was really encouraging!

Redone all my works, come and see!

Hello, Christine C! You can come to my profile and read and comment on "Twist of Fate, Love, and Temptation." before tonight at 5PM, because I am entering that into a contest.

Thank you so much for critiquing my poem! I found it really helpful and I'm going right now to change it . :]
Also, I have other works [a poem and a start to my story] that you could read if you'd like.
Again, thanks!

hi, christine--
thanks for your encouraging critique of my 'bhadraksh' story! i appreciate you reading and commenting on my stuff, and agree with you about developing the ending a bit, slowing it down.

Thanks for the welcome!! And you are also welcome for the critique!! Look forward to reading more work!! HUGZ

Hello, Cristine! Thanks so much for you critique on my story! I have another called My Boyfriend's A Vampire! Go read that one too and tell me if you like it!

Hello, Chistine! I have a new story for you to comment upon called Passions of a Formerly Love Struck Black Winged BUt Tempted Kind of Angel on my profile. You can come read it and become a fan of me if you like. Thanks for reading Black Heart of Temptation and I encourage you to keep up with the good work of your poems.

Hi Christine C! Sorry that I hadn't finished Black Heart of Deceit. I just made a new chapter of Broken Hearted called a Twist of Fate, Love, and Lies. Read and critique that!

You're an astute critic, Christine. That line was the only one in the song that felt awkward, and i put it in there temporarily to rhyme it with "chance." Fortunately, something like this is easy to fix. Thanks for the comment.

Thanks for the critique on Black Heart of Deceit, here is an word long excerpt:
The burning passions that had housed themselves within my deceived black heart burned away, revealing nothing but an ember..."What do you think about that? I will get the short story done by today or Monday!

Hey, Cristine C! I loved And Onward The World IN Cgains! I wish to hear more of you on my scratchpad! Take care!