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Kieran Thomson

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Sure! Glad that you found it helpful!

Russell Nakamura

713 • Calligrapher

Happy to help! I'll keep an eye out for more of your work.

Meris Yates

72 • Pencil Pusher

Thank you so much for you critique. I'll be sure to look Robert Bly up immediately. Thanks again!

Hello. I have chapter one done. Feel free to read and critique it!

Hi, Dear Daisy. Tell me what you think on Chapter 4 of my novel Romeo and The Temptress. It is about the Temptress changing Romeo's life by giving him a love potion to Juliet, but it is actually poison. Tell me on my scratchpad!

Hello! Thanks for your comment! I have another story for you to read on my profile. Chapter 3. I will contact you here, when I get chapter 1 done!

Hi, Dear Daisy. Thanks for your critique on Broken Hearted Chapter 1. That made me feel better. I have created it into another chapter with different characters and a whole lot more clearer. Read it today and critique. If you liked it, give it a great rating! Bye now!

Hi. I just wanted to say, sorry for confusing you on Chapter One: Broken Angel. I went with your suggestion and I hope you read and give an even higher critique on it. Right now I feel saddened by how you felt and I wish that you could cheer me up...

Vega The Cat Lover

106 • Pen Wrangler

It helped quite a bit, thanks!

Alyssa Franklin

175 • Pen Wrangler

Thanks. I like yours too. I was thinking of what I'm reading and what I'm going to read (I'm an Odd virgin), otherwise I would've remembered Harry Potter.

Name:	Nicole
Sex:	Female
Location:	MA
Birthday:	Apr. 3, 1987
Words Written:	2932
Hottest Words:	michael, vianca, life, knew, body, beauty

About Me

Occupation:	Student is pretty much my number one priority, and to be honest, it isn't really my favorite. I have an Associates in Liberal Arts and am working on a Bachelors in English. I also work at a weird little country store from time to time.
About Me:	Writing is the only thing I've done for the longest period of time. I'm currently working on a play titled Brother and a fiction piece for a fiction writing class. I dabble in poetry, and have been brewing a version of Allen Ginsberg's America in my brain. I love, with all my heart, animals, especially guinea pigs, dogs and cats. I believe in Global Warming, love and happiness. I play the piano to the best of my ablility and want to start learning the guitar.
Interests:	Music, writing, reading, photograpy, art, movies, parousing the internet and video games.
Publications:	Only two poems, and I'm not sure I would really consider them REAL publications.
Favorite Books:	Well, Harry Potter and Dean Koontz books. Most of the books I read are good, but I desperately need to be more well read.
Favorite Movies:	Across the Universe, Juno, Stranger Than Fiction, Anchor Man, Fried Green Tomatos, Pride and Pregidous, Jane Eyere, White Oleander, Vanilla Sky, Seven, Disney Movies, War Movies, Scary Movies...basicly any movie.
Favorite TV Shows:	House and Bones, and the occasional VH1 reality show.
Favorite Quotes:	"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today." "Kept in a small bowl, the goldfish will remain small. With more space, the fish can grow double, triple, or quadruple its size."
Loves:	Animals Nature Family Friends My boy Sugar Emily Dickinson
Hates:	Not much. Hate is a strong word. I'll get back to you.

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The Woman that Knows My Grandmother

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Latest Works

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Dear Daisy

This is somewhat of an imitation of a Sylvia Plath poem... written for the same reason as "The Woman that Knows My Grandmother."
Please critique!! » Read...

Dear Daisy

poetry

This poem was written for a class in which the assignment was to write and imitation of the particular poet we were studying. In this case, it was Sharon Olds.
Please, please feel free to critique!! » Read...

In A Portrait

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short story, fiction, mystery

This is a short story I wrote almost 2 years ago now for a creative writing class. » Read...

A Missing Dimension

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poetry

This is a slight rewrite of my poem Monotony. I kept the other because I know there was those who liked that one too. Input is MUCH appreciated! » Read...

Latest Critiques and Comments

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On Next Time, by Meris Yates: I like this. I think you could make it into a really nice prose poem. It already has a lot going for it. I ... » Read more...

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On Mary Sweet Mary, by C. Crone: Very cute! Nice little rhyme scheme as well! My only critique... He told her his story then he showed her his gold but... » Read more...

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On Flowers On Graves, by Joey D.T.: I really like the alliteration you used in this poem. I think it clashes well with the technical descriptions. So... » Read more...

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