Sure! Glad that you found it helpful!

Happy to help! I'll keep an eye out for more of your work.

Thank you so much for you critique. I'll be sure to look Robert Bly up immediately. Thanks again!

Hello. I have chapter one done. Feel free to read and critique it!

Hi, Dear Daisy. Tell me what you think on Chapter 4 of my novel Romeo and The Temptress. It is about the Temptress changing Romeo's life by giving him a love potion to Juliet, but it is actually poison. Tell me on my scratchpad!

Hello! Thanks for your comment! I have another story for you to read on my profile. Chapter 3. I will contact you here, when I get chapter 1 done!

Hi, Dear Daisy. Thanks for your critique on Broken Hearted Chapter 1. That made me feel better. I have created it into another chapter with different characters and a whole lot more clearer. Read it today and critique. If you liked it, give it a great rating! Bye now!

Hi. I just wanted to say, sorry for confusing you on Chapter One: Broken Angel. I went with your suggestion and I hope you read and give an even higher critique on it. Right now I feel saddened by how you felt and I wish that you could cheer me up...

It helped quite a bit, thanks!

Thanks. I like yours too. I was thinking of what I'm reading and what I'm going to read (I'm an Odd virgin), otherwise I would've remembered Harry Potter.

Oh yeah, you're welcome. That is actually a technique i use sometimes. I will first just free write and then fashion that into poetry. I would love to see you pull it off!

THanks for your comment. I needed that so much! You can read and critique Chapter One of Broken Hearted tonight! I promise to critique you works!

Sweet! Easter birthdays are the best. I think we're due for one, soon...

No problem...if you get a chance check out some of my stuff. I'm looking for feedback..thanks.

Thanks for your comments! It's funny because I always found Tolkien's descriptiveness distracting, but here I am doing the same!

If you have time, please continue reading the first chapter of my book and give me your final thoughts.

Dear Daisy,
Your poem "Conquest" was bomb.
Looking forward to your next writing.
-a.mscifi

Thanks! I barely even get critriqued most of the time, so make sure you see some of my works when you get the chance!