On Wist, by Lisette Wood: This is a really good poem.  (It took me a bit to really get it though, which is why this critique has taken so long, I ... » Read more...

On Untitled Project, Chapter 1: Chpater One, by Shane Gannaway: I liked this piece of work but it may be a bit too early to tell.  You have a tag marked Fantasy but I don't see any... » Read more...

On Sidewalk Meeting, by Shane Gannaway: Hi Shane,  This is my first critique.  I felt that your poem was neat.  Not one hundred percent polished but y... » Read more...