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On Leaves, by Arday Urthona: wow!  I really like it.  It's short and sweet but still gets at me.  The theme "out with the old in with t... » Read more...
On Notes on Leaves, by my little nightmare.: It's really funny... I just finished critiquing another piece of work and I told them that they really should work on sho... » Read more...
On Saying Goodbye, by Caroline Lowe: The poem is touching, I can get a sense of how you feel when I read this poem.  Of course no one will truly know your pa... » Read more...