hi, dylan--
i'm pulling a 'dylan marketing strategy' this month.
would you mind giving my new sonnet a read? my first one in many, many...many years, and i'd love to hear what you think.
it's called 'high tide'.
thank you!

Congrats on winning second in the contest!

hi, dylan--looks like your 'boys of summer' officially KICKS ASS!!
congratulations on your placing in the contest. see how much you rock?

Hello, Dylan. Sorry that I have not critiqued on the Boys of Sumer. I was busy doing a story for a contest. You can come back and tell me if you want me to read it. Take care

hi. me again.
you're next on my critique list--wanted to let you know i hadn't forgotten you.

hey, dylan--
sure thing! i've got family visiting for the next few days, but i'll get on it as soon as i can.

Thanks! Congrats to you, too! I liked your poem the most aesthetically.

I absolutely will, and gladly. Let me know when the new version is posted and I will go through and reread it. The only reason it even caught my attention to be honest is I am doing a conflict building workshop with Ryan Edel (www.12writingworkshopsonline.com - GREAT free classes) and that was one of the topics in recent weeks

well, hello again, mr moody--
thank you for reading and commenting on the mrs brown story! have i mentioned how much i like m night??
double thanks to you!

Hello, Moody! Would you like to read Heart of Ice? It is on my profile so do you wanna read it?