hey, dylan--
thanks so much for your inspiring comments and for reading my story--and BIG congratulations on tackling a novel--i'm excited for you! (is it based on your 'boys of summer' story?)
i hope you'll let me read it when you're ready for outside eyes. i'd love to.
wow--a manuscript!! woohoo!!

hi, dylan--
i'm pulling a 'dylan marketing strategy' this month.
would you mind giving my new sonnet a read? my first one in many, many...many years, and i'd love to hear what you think.
it's called 'high tide'.
thank you!

Congrats on winning second in the contest!

hi, dylan--looks like your 'boys of summer' officially KICKS ASS!!
congratulations on your placing in the contest. see how much you rock?

Hello, Dylan. Sorry that I have not critiqued on the Boys of Sumer. I was busy doing a story for a contest. You can come back and tell me if you want me to read it. Take care

hi. me again.
you're next on my critique list--wanted to let you know i hadn't forgotten you.

hey, dylan--
sure thing! i've got family visiting for the next few days, but i'll get on it as soon as i can.

Thanks! Congrats to you, too! I liked your poem the most aesthetically.

I absolutely will, and gladly. Let me know when the new version is posted and I will go through and reread it. The only reason it even caught my attention to be honest is I am doing a conflict building workshop with Ryan Edel (www.12writingworkshopsonline.com - GREAT free classes) and that was one of the topics in recent weeks

well, hello again, mr moody--
thank you for reading and commenting on the mrs brown story! have i mentioned how much i like m night??
double thanks to you!

Hello, Moody! Would you like to read Heart of Ice? It is on my profile so do you wanna read it?

hey, dylan!
thanks very much! congratulations to you, too.
woohoo!

Congrats on winning 3rd in the contest.

You can come read Heart of Ice on my profile if you want. It is not finished, but please enjoy!

hi, dylan--
hey! thanks for the encouraging feedback on my story! i'm so glad you liked it.
i may have to ask you again about the intact question mark thing (being a bit doltish when it comes to msword)...thanks for reading!
oooh, and i just saw you've linked to me on your favorites! awesome. yay!

Hello, Dylan Moody! You can come to my profile just by clicking my name scrolling down to reecntly published works. Read Heart of Ice and tell me how it by commenting on it! It is not finished but I hope you enjoy!

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad my poem made you want to go frolic with your kids. It's one thing to write a poem people like, but it's a great feeling to write a poem that leads or inspires someone to do something.

Hello Dylan,
I did get the message and I replied back. If you go to my page again just click on the link way down in the far right hand corner and it takes you there. I will try to resend my other reply back again and see what happens...

I have published Sink Your Teeth Into Romance part 1. Go and read it today and please critique!

I have a couple of stories for you to read on my profile. Read Heart Break 1 and 2 most of all.

Hello Dylan,
Anything at anytime if I can help... just ask away! I still work on my site so for me it will always be "under construction"... I guess it's a learning process for us all... Just let me know. Have a wonderful day!

Hello,
I am currently working on my March story for my webpage, maybe once I do I can publish it here and read everyone's opinion here as well. Unfortunately, I'm not very happy with it, but I refuse to start over and I always finish what I start.... guess we will see. Have the greatest day...
P.S.
Thank you by the way, I will call you Dylan...

Thanks for the critique of Yankee Trader. I agree, the point here is to get better.

Thanks for the constructive comments! I need to learn how to phrase past-tense sentences better

Hello again...
I do subscribe to Firstwriter.com thats how I found this place! I have entered so many contests...just to try and boost my bio. Hey anytime you would like to visit my page to see what I have been doing, just let me know... your critque would be welcome there as well!

Thanks for the comment!

Hello Mr Moody,
Thank you for saying so....I did have a contract that turned out to be a scam. You will be happy to know "it didn't get me"! Now I'm starting over, but this time I will find an agent! I do have a site of my own that I maintain. It helps to keep the writing going.. Have a memorable day!

"Monday mornings, people that say, "lets agree to disagree," and watery Ketchup." I believe I understand you on a profound level.