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thanks, eli--i'll go take a look. 
hi, eli--
thanks for your critique! i'm not sure who the boy is you're referring to in your comments, though. do you remember?
thanks!
thanks for your critique! i'm not sure who the boy is you're referring to in your comments, though. do you remember?
thanks!
Welcome, Eli - on my way to check out "Garden of the Ra'El."
love the picture of cloud
hi, eli--
thanks for your thoughtful critique! i appreciate the time you put into it to help me improve the thing. i agree, it isn't a complete story, but an introductory stab at a different pov than the original version. many thanks!
thanks for your thoughtful critique! i appreciate the time you put into it to help me improve the thing. i agree, it isn't a complete story, but an introductory stab at a different pov than the original version. many thanks!
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| Name: | Eli Eldwood |
| Location: | Utah |
| Words Written: | 4,702 |
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3385 words - 5 critiquesLatest Critiques and Comments
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On Saint Anne Ch 3, Chapter 1: Saint Anne, by LJ Connell: Hello LJ, thanks for the review! Thought I'd return the
favor.
who stood with her palms facing upwards as i... Read →
Critique - Jul 14, 2009, 11:27pm - 577 words - 1.18 karma points
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On Desert Fire, by Laurie Paulsen: Lol, ok, I got confused in the middle. When the character
was watching their sister being killed, I had in mind that it... Read →
On Desert Fire, by Laurie Paulsen: First off,let me mention some of the (few) things that
distracted me.
Nothing met me out here.
The sentance seemed i... Read →
Critique - Jul 12, 2009, 10:07pm - 639 words - 3.12 karma points
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On Garden of the Ra'El, Chapter 1, by Eli Eldwood: I'm curious what your thoughts are on a few items:
I hope the ocean scene conveys some of the "sights and sounds
that ca... Read →
