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On Scent of Roses... Magical, Chapter 1, by Barbara Deloris Walker: You have an interesting concept here, but I
found your piece to be little difficult to
follow. I know th... » Read more...
On Ceiling Vs. Stars, by Alex Looper: Great job with this piece. It reads much better and is a
good story. You have very good desriptive lines. The part abou... » Read more...
On Ceiling Vs. Stars, by Alex Looper: This is much better. You cleared up the ambiguities nicely.
Everything flows well and there is a nice force driving your plot... » Read more...
On Memoir, Part I, Service Years, Chapter 3: The Date, Chapter 4: Education, by Babs Griswold: You've created a great piece here. I couldn't stop
reading. The naration is lively and believable so that it dr... » Read more...
On Curiosity Did Not Kill the Cat, Chapter 1: 1, by Kayla Brady: I want to start by saying great piece and good idea. It is an
interesting story and I already love your main character.
I hav... » Read more...
On Ceiling Vs. Stars, by Alex Looper: Wow! This is an amazing improvement from your first draft! There
are still a few things that could stand to be looked at,
but... » Read more...
On T, by N L Snowden: This is a good
story and has the potential to be really creepy. However, instead
of drawing out the fear, I felt like I was r... » Read more...
On Memoir, Part I, Service Years, Chapter 1: The Beginning/Basic Training, by Babs Griswold: I would just like to say that this is an amazing piece. It
is well polished. It was delightful and I could hardly stop
... » Read more...
On Passenger, by Jordan Griffin: I love this piece! The rythm flows wonderfully. I can
really see what is happening and I fell that I am right there in
... » Read more...
On Ceiling Vs. Stars, by Alex Looper:
To start, I want to say how much I like the way you created a
surreal feeling in the first section and I... » Read more...
On No Working Title, Chapter 4, by K. J. Armstrong: Plot
I like the way you've developed the story so far. It is an
interesting take on the idea. It did feel a little... » Read more...