Hi Emma,
I read your submission. What a nice imaginative story. Hope you are still writing. I look forward to seeing more.
P.S. I'm glad you liked mine.

I just finished my story if you would like to read it. Thank you for all your help!

Thanks, Emma, for the nice critique. I'm having a great time writing this biography, remembering things I haven't thought about for 50 years!

Hello.thanks so much for looking at my piece.A couple otehr people siad the same things you did, and i have revised some of it.Thanks for the help!!
-Kayla

Hey Emma, After you critiqued my second draft, I went in and changed some things. If you feel up to it, give it a look. thanks

Alex

Hey Emma, I revised my story. It's not finished, but It's a big improvement. Let me know what you think.

Alex