On Kleenex Box Full of Sugar, Chapter 3: Old love, by Brittany:  You really made me smile with this.  I like the old references with "old prune" and "whole bran muffin."  Ste... » Read more...

On un-born again, by matthew vanhorn:  These is a really nice poem you've written.  I really like how you convey your message of a journey from a pur... » Read more...

On Spiritual Breathing, by Angel w o Wings:  You have a really nice poem going along here.  I might have mentioned this before, but your langauge use is great!... » Read more...

On Long Stay the Night, by Angel w o Wings:  Hi.  This is a beautifully read poem.  You demonstrate a great command of language, and I think it's grea... » Read more...

On The Ottoman, by Cameron Wiles:  Hi.  I like what you did here.  You give a great picture of what this man is.  (I agree with Kajikawa, h... » Read more...

On Falafel Philosophy, by Mandi:  Hey, I really liked what you've written.  Reading it, I can really feel how this just flowed out of you. ... » Read more...