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On City At Night, by Everett Scott: In reply to The Geek's comment;
When I say foxes, it isn't a metaphor... I do actually mean
foxes.
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On Story of Winter, Chapter 1: 1- December 2nd, by Guena McKriffin: Don't capitalise Robin
It's not a proper noun
And, wheyy, cool piece
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On City At Night, by Everett Scott: I did rather like Jon's suggestions...
I might go with the first one
It's rather cool
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On City At Night, by Everett Scott: Oh it wasn't the content she had a problem with, it was the
ending
And please be careful what you say, my mother u... » Read more...
On Self, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: This human race is filled with sin:
Our secret fires that burn within,
Leap higher 'til we cannot see;
In serving self we... » Read more...
On The Water Marks, by Laurie Paulsen:
The water marks hold secrets
close,
Inky whisp... » Read more...
On In A Fish Bowl With A Three-Second Memory Span, by Zacchary Tailor: I like this, it was very... insightful.
The way I interpreted the ending was that these are the musings
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On Music, by Stefan Kaiser: Okay, first off... I have never written a critique before
so bear with me. This is quite a step up from the Mibba comme... » Read more...