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On When Friends Return, by Aleki Suibhne: I love how you place the protagonist directly in the story with
first person point of view. I love that we find her at the wi... » Read more...
On Moon Loves You Most, by Christine C: Opening Comments
painting blurry images
on a landscape that has swallowed your mother
and misplaced your father.
This was ... » Read more...
On Noise, by Traci S:
If only they would succumb to the same motion
and drown in a swirl that would
carry then away to a place that is only
spoke ... » Read more...




