On The Fly and the Bee, by Finnie:  Thanks for taking the time to critique this, and a lot of it is very helpful actually. It'll be a little while, but... » Read more...

On Resilience, by Vincent Slade: Opening Comments Although like others, I am a bit weary on the subject, I was surprised at how well I ended up liking this. ... » Read more...

On Wrung From the Lungs of Thee, by Finnie: Thank you I usually don't write in this kind of style (in fact, I find this is the only poem I really have like this),&n... » Read more...

On Is this not Spring?, by Lyla Sherman: Opening Comments Nice first stab! Poetry can be a tricky little insect, or can't it? Very specific, yet not so specific&... » Read more...

On Ode to a Poet, by Stewart Flintonlaubakersmith: Opening Comments I was first attracted to this piece by the title (I have a weak spot for odes), and I have to say that over... » Read more...