That sound! On the wind. The FFF is calling. Will you answer?

Thank you so much for the helpful critique. It's part of a three-part POV of short story exercises I set myself, the angel Gabriel, his child and his wife.

Just make sure nobody offers you Hemlock.

No worries! The corruption of children is far more important.

At the risk of hogging your scratchpad, here is your Monday guilt-trip for the microfiction circle. The circle-god demands blood, and cannot be sated unless we feed it microfiction!

Er, or it wasn't unworthy enough to have them thrown at it... Or something.

It wan't bad, right? That's what I mean.

I exist to please.

(And it certainly wasn't worthy of throwing vegetables at, anyway. )

Yeah, sorta. I was thinking of them as possible alternatives to express the things you already wrote. Looking back at what I did, it's hella confusing! Sorry about that...

Thanks for the critique on "She Can't Turn Back," it was much appreciated! It's funny that you find it kind of like poetry...is that a bad thing? I kind of like it for that reason!

Thankee muchly!