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On Memories, by Cody Morales:  This was a good poem. Though I thought it would be a depressing poem, it in turned surprised me to be more on the peace... » Read more...
On "How I Read" and "The Beauty of Chaos", by Rachele: The first work was nice. I could identify with it because it sounds just like me. I was wondering if you were just writing of... » Read more...
On Amnesia, by Arianna Roberts:  I really liked this story. I was instantly drawn into the story. The way you used the words to draw the scene was reall... » Read more...
On Argos, by Taylor Smith:  The story was a really good starter. I like how you tried to show the story from an animal's point of view. At firs... » Read more...