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Showing 4 of 4 critiques and comments.
On Memories, by Cody Morales: This was a good poem. Though I thought it would be a
depressing poem, it in turned surprised me to be more on the
peace... » Read more...
On "How I Read" and "The Beauty of Chaos", by Rachele: The first work was nice. I could identify with it because it
sounds just like me. I was wondering if you were just writing of... » Read more...
On Amnesia, by Arianna Roberts: I really liked this story. I was instantly drawn into the
story. The way you used the words to draw the scene was reall... » Read more...
On Argos, by Taylor Smith: The story was a really
good starter. I like how you tried to show the story from an
animal's point of view. At firs... » Read more...




