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On Musings (working title), Chapter 1, by Fainne Grant:
Hello Fainne- I got around to
reading the revision! LOL finally right?
okay first things
first--
I still l... » Read more...
On Island Conspiracy, Chapter 0: Part 1: Gifts and Conflicts, by Fainne Grant: Opening Comments
hello fainne, i can see that you have a well-developed
idea for this novel, but i have some suggestio... » Read more...