i see that you critiqued one of amber lynn's works! I think it will help a lot, and I am still looking forwad to a critique on another work of mine!
~Fainne

hello again fyrenne, if you could please take the time to read and critique my work, Musings, I would grealty appreciate. i recently edited it and believe that i have made a lot of diference. thanks!
~Fainne

thanks for the raving (LOL) critique!!! im sooo so glad you liked it so much; more is coming! currently working on the 4th chapter and hope to have it published by 2009!
~Fainne