Hello! I've just started a new circle called Karma Happy. A winner is announced each week and gets .5 Karma from each member. If you are interested, check out the circle. Thanks!

Thank you Gary for the critique. I'm glad you brought notice to all the repetiveness. I'm glad you liked sections of it. That's always good to hear. Again, thank you.

Thanks for the critique. I really appreciate all of your insight and help!

my pleasure, looking forward to reading more. I really do find your idea unique!

Hello Gary, just read your latest chapters and I've gotta say I'm really liking your work.
I finished my Fire Bird story and would be honored to get your thoughts on it. Especially on plot, structure, and suggestions for improvement. Thanks.

Hi, Gary! thanks so much for the critique. Unfortunately, I deleted the piece because I decided to focus on a novel that I've been putting off for a while, and I didn't realized you had critiqued me! I wish I know what you had said, lol. Thank you anyways, though. I'm definitely going to be around to read your work, though

No worries Gary!

Hi Gary, I gave you a crit on the latest chapter. Perhaps you could show me the opening to the book sometime? I want to see how it compares to Salinger. Of course, if you hate Salinger, then what's the point? Good chapter, as always.

Hey! I just wanted to stop by and say thank you for taking the time to critique my prologue I really appreciate it, and you had some fresh and helpful ideas. So, I sincerely, thank you.

Hi Gary,
Thanks for taking the time to crit my story. Your line-by-line edits helped me to see a pattern in my mistakes (verb tense, word order) I'll have a sharper eye for those now - thanks again!