I reall appreciate yoru advice. Do me a favor, read my other piece called, SOULMATE. It was posted just Friday (I think) and then I want you to wait and see with I've come up with the NEXT day. And about the errors, well I do tend to get into a rush at times and I "hen peck" when I type lol. But I have to admit that sometimes I see it correctly and tend to move too quickly. I uasally write as I go anyway. I have to hurry and either type, write or record my ideas, if I don't they are lost for a little or for always. But please I do appreciate ALL the ponters I can get. I've just begun to, what I like to call "postscibe", maybe it'll be a new catch phrase. You heard it first here! (I think). Thank you.

No problem! It is okay if you are not a great story writer, I still believe that you have potential right inside you! I want you to come to my profile and read some of my works. To do so, click Ariadne President, scroll down my profile and you should see recently published works. Read and critique any one that you want!. You can see that I am not a long story writer all that much!