J.L. Thought you might want to join us at the Furious Flash Fiction Friday Circle Just ask Ben for an invite to the circle A great group of writers with helpful, in-depth critiques Looking forward to seeing you LOUISA

J.L., Thank you so much for the detailed critique you did for "Game Over." I really appreciate your taking time to give such an in-depth opinion, and I have to admit that I was thrilled that you really seemed to understand exactly the way I was trying to present the girl. To be honest, your critique was better than my story!

Many thanks, and I look forward to returning the favor!

J.L.,

One day I'll have to tell you a story about these initials. It's funny lately I have met many people that use initials...sounds like a storyline. Anyway, I am glad you appreciated my critique considering many people don't get where I'm coming from...you made me feel normal for a split second...just remember keep them smiling because eventually you will break their hearts...it's just easier to take enlightenment from someone who makes you laugh.

Thanks for critiquing my story! I'll take a look at yours.

I haven't read anthing from the person you mentioned, so I have no way to tell. I'll say this though; don't try to reflect another person's writing style. It won't work well on your side to do that.

I know, because I tried to be Cormac McCarthy and it didn't turn out so well. XD

gosh, you've written quite a bit here already! i just wanted to say that i'm looking forward to reading your other pieces. ( :

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