On The Bed, by Dear Daisy: One of my main problems with poetry is that it is often too verbose.  And why I like this piece is that it has a very si... » Read more...

On Ignorant Treason, by Ezra Fortune: I think that the decision to stick to a rhyme scheme hurts your intent in this piece. There are certainly some good ideas pre... » Read more...

On bent, Chapter 1, by Aaron Moritz: I like the general tone of this work, though I may be saying that because it is similar to some of my own. I share the concer... » Read more...