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On Polished, by Zed Hensleigh: Oh my god that wsa simply beautiful i will read more of
your work. Iam regretfull i cant now but sadly i am in class i ... » Read more...
On My Soul Is Broken, by Andrea L. Bois: My dear girl you took me and you tore me apart with your
words. I have never lost a person that was close to me bu... » Read more...
On I am, by RLyn: hey that was awsome i relally liked it, the way you worded
that the way you indented this little note in my mind was in... » Read more...
On I've Lost the War, by Eli Hart: Wow, i just fell completely into the poem. It felt like you just
swept me off my feet that peom was freakin awsome. ... » Read more...
On Hands Around My Throat, by Charlotte Clancy: Wow, this story made my teeth grind, the way you use your
words. Its a fashion i haven't seen before. Brilliant.
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On Letter From A Broken Heart, by Vinny Balducci: This was very detailic i liked it was good. I am
farely new and i have not yet read better.
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On Warchild, by penpa: This poem not only is great but its strait up true. You no
what your talkin about and your not tring to hide it cause i... » Read more...
On The Relief of Writing, by Joe Phelps: Comparing thing helps you better understand things, and
comparing writeing to sex or (masterbateing). was something i have
ne... » Read more...




