We seem to have a lot in common, Janet! Including favorite tv shows, Christian perspective and trying to learn the business. In your comment you mentioned the difficulty writing fact as fiction - I do that too! I can see all the details so clearly, I'm just positive that everyone else can see them too!
Looking forward to reading more!

Thanks for the very helpful critique. I will make the corrections you suggested. Thanks for becoming a fan. I'm flattered.

I am not sure if this is the right place, as I am new to this site, but I wanted to thank you for your critique of my work. I agree with everything you said.

I will take it, and rewrite knowing it will definitely improve my manuscript.

I look forward to reviewing your work as well. Have a great week.

Thank You for your critique. You make some interesting suggestions that I will keep in mind as I revise...I always print out all my crits.

Thanks for becoming a fan

Thanks for becoming a fan!

Oh...well thanks! I'm not sure my writing is as good as my critiques, but oh well. I try, and that's all we really can do I suppose. Thanks again

Thank you! I'm glad you like my work--I look forward to receiving a critique from you )

Thanks for the critique on Totem Janet! I appreciate how difficult it is to jump in the middle of a novel but your insight is very valuable. I feel assured that the middle isn't sagging if you found it engaging. Speech tags may be necessary, I'll keep it in mind. Thanks for your fanship too! I'll be checking out your work next week.

Thanks for adding me although I'm curious as too why considering at the moment my work is restricted haha.