Hello Jase,

Thanks for you critique of Apple Tree. I've gotten lots of feedback and it seems to all flow in the same direction, so I have a good idea of how to revise. Thanks for your input.
-Ben

hey, thanks so much for your thoughtful comments on my poem! you certainly delved into the various aspects of the symbolism, and i love that. i get to see my writing with new meaning through another's eyes.
i appreciate you taking the time to read and send me feedback--very cool. thanks, jase.

hi, jase--
welcome!
(firefly AND winnie the pooh!! yyyyeah!! )
i look forward to reading your work.

Hello Jase,

Man Without a Country, is that a newer book of essays? I haven't read that one, but Wampeters, Foma and Granfalloons is what started me on Vonnegut many years ago. I'll have to check it out.

Oh and welcome to Scribophile.

-Ben