On Sonnet for Those Who Think Not of Death, and Cherish Not Life, by Britain Roush:  The poem is great , keeping up with the theme. But it's not a Sonnet by the standard form : iambic pentameter. The ... » Read more...

On Where She Stands, by Laurie Paulsen:  The poem's theme is good. It flows well too but there are lot of feeling of immigrant are missing. The immigrants a... » Read more...

On A curse, a gift, by Nikki Williams:  It's sad, angry poem. It depicts the curse but I never found any gift in there, as the title implies. The rhymes so... » Read more...

On Out In The Up Down, by C. Crone:  I liked the poem because of its simplicity and rhythm. No punctuations anywhere and capital letters start each line is ... » Read more...

On Amnesia, by Arianna Roberts:  It is a well written flash fiction. The words move smoothly around the script. It's very effective in creating the ... » Read more...

On Shade Tree, by Laurie Paulsen:  A poem 'Shade tree' has handled the complex emotions in simple words. I also like the word discription you have... » Read more...

On Untitled, by dnmtwthlsrbm:  The poem 'chase the pain away ', untitled it says, but the title follows seems fittting. It's an emotional ... » Read more...

On Wandering, by Desmond S. Moss:  The poem ' wandering' is free-verse and more like a prose than a poem. It lacks the rhythm or rhyme and the flo... » Read more...

On I've Lost the War, by Eli Hart:  A sonnet  'I've lost the war' is a good attempt. But sonnet has a strict rules about syllables and rhy... » Read more...

On From The Mind of Me..., by Racheal Lynn:  A short fiction 'From the mind of me...' has a story and it flows well. But if the paragraphs were included in ... » Read more...

On In a Crowded Room, by Jenny:  Hi, You have written a short , realistic poem. A good read, Jaya H. ... » Read more...

On True Being, by Dawn Rodgers:  The Poem 'True being' is not what one expects to read but it's oblivion. The empty mind can be a devil'... » Read more...

On The Boys of Summer, by Dylan Moody:   I just read  'The boys of summer' , a flash fiction, tagged as fantasy, which prompted mre to read. And I... » Read more...

On Set Me Free, by Brittany Teeter:  The poem ' and  I am tired' starts out well but doesn't grow at all.  It has some grammatica... » Read more...

On Void, by dreamchaser:  It's a poem expressing the messages around you make you feel insignificant. The flow is good, the portrait of ... » Read more...